AKS9's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Brainstorm!]

amazing

that was great. the animation was so smooth and stylish and I really like the environments and the sort of textured look thing they had.
i just wish it had ended less abruptly, to have seen something else happen between the rabbit and octopus!

[Frame By Frame Flash]

yyyyyy

i didnt think much at first, with the stick figures, but it got pretty good. i like the hand you did that was followed by a flower and a rocket maybe, i cant remember. but the hand bit was really good and it gets better, nice one keep it up!

J0hnnyR0tt3n responds:

thank you very much.

[Santa's Last Stop]

hahahah

ahahahha fucking hilarious the voice acting was gold
ending was really good, much better than what at first seemed was going to happen but didn't

[Little Aviator]

nice one

that was really really good. really well done!

[Cpt Falcon Checkup]

ahahahahaha

god

[Look up at the sky]

amazing

That was just amazing. I really liked your clouds and the colour shifts. I feel like you're doing stuff with flash that I don't see many other people doing, it's like pushing into new realms in a way

[Papa and the door]

audiooooo

you really need to fix the sound! the animation and drawing were actually really good, it just seemed crap cos the sound didn't sync with it. Although it was done at a low frame rate, the animatin itself IS really good so don't let the comments get to you. Should be a kinda longer delay between each door opening though, to make the movie's flow more even. Like, story-wise it would make for better timing I think.

As for fixing the sound, well....
all the sound effects should be in separate audio files, and they should be set to "stream" in the flash properties panel. It feels sorta like you've got all the sounds in one big file that plays at a different speed to the movie. If that's the case, then you should set this file to "stream" also and adjust the animation to sync with it.

mayshing responds:

ah, that could be it, it's typical for normal sound designer to do one big flat file that's sync to the film itself, but it doesn't work with flash. That's a good clue.
I had no such problem when all the sounds are separated into different layers. :)

[Christmas Tales]

aayayayuryrr

well i thought it was pretty good, i found it funny at least and I liked to drawing style.
1h that is quick dude
if you spent two weeks or so you could come up with something really good

[Alien 3k]

style

really cool, i liked the simple style and colours and the neat way it ended with the roof scene. hope you got a good mark for it in your class.
something that might help, there is this thing with the voices and sounds that they have a background fuzz and it is distracting. of course the fuzz is hard to remove from the voices, but if you put a continous background fuzz on you won't notice the voice/sound clip fuzz. the continuous background fuzz would get zoned out and wouldn't become annoying either i believe.
anyway just hoped that would be helpful good luck on your next flashes!
i agree with what pampman said too

[CrowsFeet]

jumpjump

totally crazy amazing art style
theres a bug at the second "play" screen, if you wait too long without pressing play the scarecrow dissapears! (or is this an easter egg? !!!!!)

UnderARock responds:

naw it dissapears :C I just thought hey how many people will wait till this things dissapears

and fuck me, I just realized how awesome you are, sloppy fight 2 was one of the animations that inspired me to animate